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Work Sample & Commentary: Living Rooms as Classrooms

The task
Students were asked to read and respond to a newspaper article. They were asked to pay particular attention to the way the articles were written and the implications underlying the arguments.

Circumstances of performance
This sample of student work was produced under the following conditions:
alone in a group
in class as homework
with teacher feedback with peer feedback
timed opportunity for revision

What the work shows
a Public Documents: The student critiques public documents with an eye to strategies common in public discourse, including:
• effective use of argument;
• use of the power of anecdote;
• anticipation of counter-claims;
• appeal to audiences both friendly and hostile to the position presented;
• use of emotionally laden words and imagery;
• citing of appropriate references or authorities.

This work sample illustrates a standard-setting performance for the following part of the standards:

a Public Documents: Critique public documents.


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The student identified certain aspects of the argument being considered and responded responsibly, stating agreement with two of the aspects, but not the third.
The student made use of emotionally charged words and imagery to present a counter-argument.
The work appeals to both friendly and hostile audiences by clearly identifying the point of disagreement and then discussing it in a reasonable manner.